Autumn [Haiku]

by Forever Hers   Oct 30, 2013


Ever falling leaves
Paint beauty onto pavement;
A sweet symphony.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Love the imagery of this piece!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Very meaningful haiku.
    I love the second line its really nice to imagine.

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very beautiful poem Brittany. There is so much detail here that plays in my mind. First of all the leaves. I love the imagery of falling leaves because it tells me that Autumn is here and it is getting colder. SoI think this is based on reality bbecause it really is colder. The second line is my favorite because I can see that beauty all around. Since you said beauty though in my mind it means there are colours to the leaves and a rainbow of colours all around. I also love the word paint as well. That means there are many different colours. Like I said a rainbow. Now the last line. The symphony. I think that means is they fall with grace and they are beautiful haha. Anyway this is a great haiku as it is so rich with wording and very detailed.