Sinister.. I love it. Lost me near the end there. I think the poem would be better if it ended around the fourth paragraph. 5/5 |
by Salvingcams
Thank you for your comment. I wasn't really focusing on the structure...I just had it all out. You know |
by Misundertood
Wow that is a great read and i like the whole poem its great |
by Lune de ma vie
Excellent write here. I loved every minute of it you did such a vivid job! |