Eating the weather (Senryu)

by Mr. Darcy   Nov 7, 2013


Heads tilted right back
Children stand with their tongues out
Capturing snow flakes

7.11.13
M. Moran

Definition: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Senryu
Senryu is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer total morae. Senryu tend to be about human foibles...

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What wonderful imagery conjured in such a little space! Excellent again.

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Mr Darcy...

    Great to see that you are still writing! :)

    Beautiful write! Reminds me of innocence, hope and Christmas all in one!

    Hope you are well xoxoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You captured the innocent playfulness of children very well, Michael!

    well done,

    ((hugs))
    Ingrid

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