Comments : Think Before You Speak

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    When trust is broken it's one of the worst things in the world to deal with. I like how you say it's been stolen too. there are many ways it can be stole but you say through out the poem that your heart is broken so it could be someone in your family or a friend that hurt you. Lies are also hard to deal with as well. I like the connection through out the whole poem as well. Because lies lead to trust being broken and your heart being broken. Again this poem holds so much sadness but it is well written again. Well done.