Foolish

by Baby Rainbow   Nov 7, 2013


Temptation echoes,
weakness falls into the trap;
why must hearts be fooled?

Saffie
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30/10/13

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    My overall interpretation of this senyru is that the temptation to trust someone to love again is there, it echoes in your mind, making you question a time maybe when you swore that you would never fall in love again.

    Eventually, you can't help but fall into their trap...the trap of love.. once more. You warned yourself and even prepared yourself but something told you to take this chance on this person, that not everyone is the same and that maybe this love will be different... only for your heart to be fooled once more by someone you thought you could trust.

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    First line- I love how you make all the starts to your poems they could make a lot of ideas. Here I like the word temptation. I think hearts are tempted by a lot of people when we fall for them. Echoes I think means you have fallen for people more than once. A heart can be weak and strong but when it falls in love and then gets hurt. I also like the word trap here. Since you havebeen hurt before it can be considered a trap yes. I love the last line as well bbecause as you saidhearts are fooled all the time. I think if you care for so many people you do get hurt. Because abused hearts do love the most. That's i think what you are saying here. No matter what be who you are. Great write