Bonsai Tree (Nonet)

by Maple Tree   Nov 11, 2013


Depths of my soul cry under the sky
moonlit night songs bid thee goodbye
leaving me whispering, why?
must I silently sigh
as they see my eyes
tear filled, I try
to deny
a dry
lie.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Dearst

    my eye are burning and dripping at the same time, this is lovely

  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Bonsai trees symbolize spirituality: peace, harmony and all that is good.
    Though I don't know if the poem is in relation to it, but I like the structure the nonet has as well as the rhymes. This piece has a melancholic tone but also good imagery. It transports me some place where I can connect with nature, I also feel a strange connection to it.

    I like it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    I love how it rhymes, its hard to write a rhymed nonet and your felt seemless and so easy to read.

    Love it!

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