Comments : Hourglasses & Sandcastles.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was deep and powerful and not at all what I expected from the title. As usual MaryAnne you penned a piece that touched me, and wrapped me in the metaphors and emotions.

    I loved this piece :) x

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    Judging comments:

    What a chilling piece of poetry!! This poem was so unlike anything POTP has written that I've gone through, as she talks about basically destroying someone. She is such a feisty fighter!! That third stanza (or set of two lines) made the poem for me. Such a dreamy way to fight people, the way it all read out. I really, really love this poem!