by Everlasting
From that three letter word to four |
by Robert
From I love you, to will you marry me, and then goodbye |
by Everlasting
Double post. |
by Sylvia
Our memory can play tricks on us. We remember things one way and over time it does change and we as humans tend to embellish the truth of the matter and then there is the other person's side of the story, their memory of the situation and they do the same things we do, embellish. Human nature being what it is, we almost always make ourselves look better, less responsible in the repeating of the memories. From a technical view, the flow is off and could use some work and close to the end, seems more like just a conversation rather than verses in a poem, not a good description of how it made me feel but best I can do. Need to watch the use of apostrophes and commas. |