This is a very lovely poem hun. I think the only thing I see wrong is at the end of the second stanza. I think there should be a pause whether it be a comma or period. That's just me. Now the poem is very lovely as it shows in my mind how much love can make darkness go away. Forever is also a good word to use here as well because the heart makes it feel like it's forever. The emotion is used well and I can tell you put your heart into this. Good write.