Robert, reading this I could see and imagine the struggle the person was feeling. You presented the message with "normal" words, meaning I didn't have to have the dictionary to understand what you were writing. As for the technical part, the flow is a little off but could be smoothed out with removing some of the filler words. Overall a good read and nice work.

That sinking feeling once it grips you it just pulls you all the way down and climbing out of it is just difficult...I know. This message was well presented with your words...take care.