Numb

I like how you used the clock to start out this poem. I think when you are lonely the you can focus on one thing and it drives you into sadness and madness. Everything you write here is so well done. Your thoughts do race with memories that you don't want toknow. I love the wording at the end of this too. I thinkwhat you are saying throughout is that you want to feel nothing bebecause it's better than feeling sad. Again I loved how you stayed on track here and were consistant. I loved the title as well. It's simple but you made it fit the poem so well.