The details here are amazing again. I love in this one how you just dove right in so to speak. Though it is very short you make the image play out very well. I think your readers will love the way you play out each line. They connect very well. You also made it very classy well somewhat. It's naughty haha but not extreme. I think though this could be a daydream or fantasy that you had to write down. This person is always on your mind and heart and I can feel like your wrote this from your heart. Well done again!