I am very jealous of the way you end your poems lol. I like this poem a lit because of the fact that you built up to the end here. Each of the first four stanzas is very lovely to read because of the way you used your emotion. Though you only used your point of view I feel connected. The way you talk about yhe other person is great. It seems like this other person is filled with sadness and dark and they were in a battle all their own. Then you came along and fell in love :). Now together you will fight to stay happy. We always do anything to have our love smile. This poem is very unique overall because of the title. You surprised me at the end as well saying you were the soldier. :). Another great write