Desert Romance

by ZinaZonic   Nov 16, 2013


Hes-co Blocks is all you see,
Calls of prayer for them not me
a constant footstep on the ground
as I walk the walk with my four legged hound

Lash Vegas as its commonly known
From local children rocks are thrown
Although my thoughts are somewhere else
Your touch Ive always long to have felt

Olivia West is her name
since that first message I haven't been the same
A dating website is where we first spoke
a message every morning, when Ive just woke

I'm not sure what will come of this
When we meet it will surely be bliss
In time when weeks have finally flown
We shall meet, when i come home.

Quick poem, written after meeting a lady on a dating website while I'm out in afghan

Something feels right :)

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  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very good poem. Though the first two stanzas give the feeling that you are alone. Well not alone but maybe heartbroken. You have your pet with you which I love that you added it because I love animals. Okay now the last two stanzas are full of love. I like how you added her name as well. It tells me it's more personal to you and it makes the reader connect to that romance. When you wake up to see a message from this person it makes you more happy and I can tell that here. That first meeting will be special with this person. I loved thepoem overall because of the emotions you bring. Well done.

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