Comments : Desert Romance

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very good poem. Though the first two stanzas give the feeling that you are alone. Well not alone but maybe heartbroken. You have your pet with you which I love that you added it because I love animals. Okay now the last two stanzas are full of love. I like how you added her name as well. It tells me it's more personal to you and it makes the reader connect to that romance. When you wake up to see a message from this person it makes you more happy and I can tell that here. That first meeting will be special with this person. I loved thepoem overall because of the emotions you bring. Well done.