Okay, MaryAnne. Firstly, I want to say that this piece really sank deep into me and I hope that this isn't personal to you in that way.
I could feel a deep anger in this piece, almost reserved, like the amount of times this person goes to end there life just to find that it isn't the time for it to happen, you know.

I felt the emotion in the words, even though it was still smooth and kept in check through the final lines.

I love the title, as how the thoughts of suicide are illegal, as if they shouldn't be thought, because we'd be punished.

What a piece, amazing and once again, I hope that this isn't personal to your thoughts and if it is, you know you can message me any time right?

Hugs and love,
xx

This really hits the reader deep in the gut. The pain of life, that can go so deep, it makes you want to flirt with death...and yet, the irriversibility of the act keeps you from going that route.

Well done, MaryAnne, you captured the emotion really well:)

5/5 Ingrid

Only a writer with confidence can birth this class of poem.Am loving this despite the emotional groans I hear deep inside my soul.Cool.