I loved the vivid imagery again. I could feel the anger you gave to the character and I could relate to this. It seems maybe this person is bi polar. They are obviously very hurt. I love how you say the dishes decorated the hardwood that was very unique. The part where you showef anger to this character is really good. Each line seems to connect with each other well.I think when we feel emotion we need to fill it up with ssomething and it can over take us. That's what happens here. Overall this is amazing one of your best new ones. :)