by Lost in Love Jul 3, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
I have made mistakes |
I really like this poem. I wish my ex would have written me something like that. Everything you said i could relate to. That is what makes a good writer. Keep it up. |
by Lost in Love
Sara, |
i thought it was a very hearfelt, inspired, and beautiful poem. Some of the words you chose didn't quite flow, but it was very captivating. Also you're pattern made it kind of choppy, but not hard to understand. I think you can be more creative in your writing style, although it's hard i know. Keep writing. |