This is the best poem I have read lately! I am in awe, and in love with the tenderness of it. The opening captured me instantly, and the way it was written just kept me going and going not wanting to stop or for it to finish. This is beyond what talent can create, and you both did a wonderful job constructing it.

Keep it up, both your talents complement each other epically :)

xxx

I loved the second and third stanza in this. For some reason, it just stands out to me more than anything. It's a tender poem, something that I can picture being read in a soft voice to match the mood you've set for it. I loved it :)

Dear Maple Tree thanks for the Collaboration and I hope I did not embarrass you that much.
:) :)

There is a tenderness to this write which makes this read smooth and warm..well penned you two!