by Redangelwings
This is a really good poem Meme. I think to feel safe we all hide behind a mask. I thinl here though you are saying that this person was not honest to you. So their true colors show. The cost I think was maybe your trust thats what it seems to me here. Your heart is always the first thing to go and that is hurt also. What is the price of hurting someone? I guesz it depends on the person. I loved how you let your feelings out though usually they make the best poems and this was great |
by Maple Tree
Ohhhhh the message is awesome!! And beautiful nonet form... you nailed it Meme! |
by Meme
Thanks a lot guys :) |
I love the form, Meme! It's refreshing to see a formed poem every once in a while! :) |
Who in d world dare not wear a mask, of truth for a while, of a fake smile n happiness.... N wen d world has slept so d masked one n its time 4 d dreams 2wear d mask.... |
I love the form and the message behind every words :) This world is a masquerade ball... everyone is hiding behind masks... 5/5 |
by Jyoti Rawat
Every body has mask you r right but where is your sharp eyes to judge. |