Comments : A soldiers Christmas

  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Okay first off, when you told me you was mind blown yourself because of this poem, I knew it was going to be good but wow! This is absolutely amazing.
    " Santa looked at the soldier, eyes now teary.
    This was the site of pure beauty. "
    I could see that in my head while I was reading it.
    This is a heart touching poem. I am mind blown and completely speechless. Fantastic job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    Wow brilliant, brings tears to my eyes for one man to make such a difference . Great work :)

    In the 6th stanza you have got Sun not son not sure if this was intentional.

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLYBXBE

    Every ounce of this made my
    Heart melt. It's amazing. And probably the sweetest ever. There's nothing more beautiful than a soldier doing his duty and to be recognized is pure magic. I love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by David Amenger

    A poem with a heart-touching aroma.I love this big time.