Congrats on the win!

Much congratulations to you. Great poem!!

Besides the anger, there lies deeper pain within this write. It calls out to every mothers' heart by a yearning child who wants nothing more then to help find comfort for the heart...touching write.

Congrats on the win.

This is touching and it contains a message to mothers that we have a difficult time doing and that is letting go of our children. Mothers are there when no others are, through the pain and hard times, the good times and we want to "fix" everything for our children when in reality the child just needs for us to "let them go" to live their own life, make their own mistakes. That is the greatest gift a mother can give to her child. Congratulations on the win, well deserved.

Congratulations on the win, Kuya Justin :)) I already rated this before but I don't how to comment until now... This is just beautiful and heartfelt :))

--- MKKK

Judging comment:

My gosh. This poem had so much emotion and power behind it.. it instantly gave me chills and midway through had me in tears. Poetically speaking it had a lot of devices that were interesting to watch for.. I particularly loved the bits of rhyme and don't know if it was intended or not, though it was strategic enough that I feel it was. The poem on an emotional level was dug so deep that it just broke my heart. I truly loved the way the writer wrote about the things the mother would do. It makes me want to know more into the back story, I am craving for more information! Gut wrenching write, one I have a hard time really digging into as it feels so personal. Well done