Intervals

by JaneDoeWrites   Nov 18, 2013


Transient high,
meet me at the skyline
with this lonely view
of all the stars she named for you.

Magnetics unwind,
this cataclsym's her demise.
As she pleas the sun implodes
so the cosmic dust corrodes-

Every memory of his scars
pressed to her lips,
in this planetary plunge
she could not exit.

So 'x' it, we could only exist,
in this void, furthest reaches of space...
Well if you ever find your way back to this place,
meet me at the skyline.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This I agree is very unique. I can imagine looking up at the sky painted with colors. The reality sets into a heart of sadness. Memories fill the mind of a heaven maybe. The wording here is outstanding. I was memorized by each line playing out through my head. Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this Crystal...the rhymes were smooth, really fit into the piece well. I liked the sadness to this, but it wasn't overly intense, there was a vulnerability, but a gentle tone...

    really good :) xx

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