I loved this Crystal...the rhymes were smooth, really fit into the piece well. I liked the sadness to this, but it wasn't overly intense, there was a vulnerability, but a gentle tone...

really good :) xx

This I agree is very unique. I can imagine looking up at the sky painted with colors. The reality sets into a heart of sadness. Memories fill the mind of a heaven maybe. The wording here is outstanding. I was memorized by each line playing out through my head. Well done.