I really like this poem. Its soft and warming, sweet and alluring. Love the way the words fell in place. Great job

I really like this poem. Its soft and warming, sweet and alluring. Love the way the words fell in place. Great job

I really like this! I love how the beginning of each stanza is almost like a pleading command. You want to please your lover so you tell them to take you there, tell you where and show you how they want it. Very clever and flows beautifully!