Oh how I adore your poetry! ^^ you hv such raw talent dear. Your words are like the melody of a much craved song, flowing, detailed and original. Keep it up!

I think your writing has a maturity that is behind comparison. I can tell you love flowers again and it seems you write here about a person or a friend you need. I think you write that they are your inspiration and compare them to a certain flower. There are tones here that you think about this person a lot of your day. You see such beauty in the simplest of things and that I believe makes your writing so much better and enhanced. You see the world as beautiful even though I think here you write about tones of sadnesd but there is also a tint of hope.

Overall this poem is also great. The ending is very beautiful as well. You see the world as a field full of violets. I think again you see the world full of beauty. Thats just my opinion. Keep writing from your heart and you will get better.

A new promise
is born...
and that is
to always
from my heart.

^ I think it's missing something... "that is to always ... from my heart?"