Is it really this possible to feel for someone you hardly know as much as im feeling for you? I must be ... Bless at this one :( x

I like this because it shows that we are all human. I think my only nitpick is the way it's formed bit maybe that's just me. Anyway. It seems we always blame ourselves in life even though it's not our fault. I like how you wrote this this though. It seems like this person was your whole life and now they have shattered your trust. You should never blame yourself for being yourself though. It's hard to hate people when they have been through your a lot of your life. Anyway Ilike the ssimplicity of this. It holds so much sadness throughout and it's consistant. Great job.