by Beautiful Soul
This is a pretty good poem here. I do like the message you bring here. I like the emotions too. I think what youare saying is that you feel like it's time for you to move on to the next part of your life because everything is the same. That's why I like the title as well. You sometimes have to push yourself out of your comfort zone. I like the wording you used here as well. It seems like you are making yourself go mad and the window is your sanity. Then you just decide to leave and live your life. I like this because we all have felt like this and it's based in reality. Great little write here |
"Pacing back and forth on same concrete floors |