by CathyButterflyJC Nov 21, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Sequel to You Are Mine |
by Redangelwings
This poem is okay and I feel like it's pretty cliche for a love poem. though I know it came from your heart and that is a good thing about it. It didn't really wow me but I am glad you wrote out your feelings. It is choppy in a lot of spots that take the flow off. Pretty good but it didn't have that pop. I would say though that if you usemore metaphors you can upgrade it :). 4/5 |
by Kate
"And pinches herself to make sure it's real" |