"And pinches herself to make sure it's real"

This line really stands out to me.. maybe from personal experience but it really shows the whole idea that you do love him and that it seems to be unreal how much you can love someone that much, that that perfect person for you exists.. I can relate.

Nicely done.

This poem is okay and I feel like it's pretty cliche for a love poem. though I know it came from your heart and that is a good thing about it. It didn't really wow me but I am glad you wrote out your feelings. It is choppy in a lot of spots that take the flow off. Pretty good but it didn't have that pop. I would say though that if you usemore metaphors you can upgrade it :). 4/5