Made strong (only by you)

by Poet on the Piano   Nov 23, 2013


Goosebumps sneak
on bare skin, as I feel
cleansed, stepping out
of a pearly tub
and truly seeing I still
have potential.

There is something about
spring water purifying dirt,
both hidden and visible,
while bitter thoughts clear
and songs don't just
drift- they stay.

Fog slithers away from
my mirror, from my lens,
from my soul...

I am moved (by you).

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Written 11/22/13 @ 10:26 PM

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  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is brilliantly beautiful. I don't think I could critique it at all. Nice job! you and your pen have a fabulous relationship.