Comments : Embracing the Monster

  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    I like this. The rhyme flow is really easy, rolls off the tongue when read aloud ( yes I do read things aloud XD ) and it has great imagery.

    My favorite part in this is:
    Their souls he will soon devour for his feast,
    The man is just embracing the monster.

    and the reason being for that is because it gave me chills.

    Great job! :)