Wow... this cuts deeper than any knife ever could. Very powerful from from start to finish. I think my heart stopped for a while. Great job!

Thia is a very lovely poem. I love how you put so much emotion into this. It seems that you are happy at the beginning then towards the end you fall apart. The wording you used is great and simple but it plays out well. Each line os full of great imagery and I love the power it holds. Though this is a love poem there are somany sad elements to it. Great write.

Bless at this :(

Bless at this :(

Nice poem.

This takes me back to how it used to be. I like it

This takes me back to how it used to be. I like it