Great work i loved it

A beautiful write, you can see the emotion you put into every line.

"A face without a trace of doubt,
two eyes I search no longer.
(Now searching for a new way out.)
a sadness growing stronger."

I really like the flow of this stanza.

Wow, this poem made me smile. not because of what it is about, but because of the emotion that you displayed through out the entire poem! I love it! This was a beautiful write.

"" Thank you, I've been meaning to submit more poems but alas, I keep leaving them places other than with me. :P ""

uhmm, submit more? This was a joy to read.

Beautifully written, it seems like the wind was a soul that cannot find peace, 5/5

Its so deep, it really conveys lot of feelings and energys I am really amazed it touched me

Powerful and beautifully sad. Great write :-)

This sounds like a soulful song sung by the writer. I could just see it all. I also like the flow of the poem and the rhymes were well suited that it made it sound smooth.

I also like the title for that is what made me want to read it and the emotions and imagery painted in it shows the depth of pain...beautifully sad...take care.