Sheer Betrayal

by SarZz   Jul 3, 2004


Still yearning,
2 feel the heat.
Still burning,
As I dance on these scorching beats,

My deseases,
Known as never curing,
Myself,
known as ever fearing,
My love seems not to be caring,
Turning a deaf ear,
Seems not to be hearing,

Ive gotten of the track,
My journey has come to a halt,
Was it something I lacked?
Or what is U who was at fault,

The sheer betrayal,
These continued regrets,
Don't seem 2 have failed,
Hanging all over,
On this wall I'm permanently nailed...

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  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    =) i agree wif patti =) nice ending =) nice poem =) def a 5 =) dang gurlo, ur only 13 but dayum u write hella good =) keep it up yo, ;) i love ur creations =) ciao

  • 20 years ago

    by insane authority

    o ya thanx for teh theeeee 3 comments lollo

  • 20 years ago

    by insane authority

    yes
    that was a great poem and a great ending
    woww!! :) :)