Comments : Sheer Betrayal

  • 20 years ago

    by insane authority

    yes
    that was a great poem and a great ending
    woww!! :) :)

  • 20 years ago

    by insane authority

    o ya thanx for teh theeeee 3 comments lollo

  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    =) i agree wif patti =) nice ending =) nice poem =) def a 5 =) dang gurlo, ur only 13 but dayum u write hella good =) keep it up yo, ;) i love ur creations =) ciao