At The Mountain Top - A Drop of Hope

Whit braw wurds ye write here. A read it while a wiz eatin a packet o cheese and onion crisps.

Judges comment 2/12/13'

A The Mountain Top - A Drop of Hope by Everlasting (4)
First of all, can I ask if the title should be At the Top of the Mountain?
I've read this poem over and over and fall in love with it a little more each time. I just flows like liquid gold from start to finish and this made me wonder if it's a certain style of formed poetry? If so, I suggest adding a footnote at the bottom for the reader. I also found the layout to be very eye catching. I thought this verse to be very well presented both in structure and content. Nice job, Enjoyable read.

This will make an inspiring card for those who need inspiration. It gives a boost to then mind and encouragement for the heart..well done & well penned!

This is really beautiful, Ms. Lucero :))) I really love this piece :)) I love the rhymes and the hopeful texture of this poem :))

At the mountain top, I'll wait for you,
Like morning dews in Summer's hue

your this is very nice.