by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko Nov 30, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You are an |
by Meena Krish
There is a voice to your poems which pulls the reader into the writer's world and the mind moves with the flow. Liked the vivid images which engages the mind too..beautifully penned! |
by Everlasting
This is the type of poem that captivates me! I enjoyed reading it. It's the voice and tone of the poem that just grabs me and absorbs me and makes me feel how you are feeling- proud to be who you are. Great write. |
Simply Awesome!! |
by Beautiful Soul
Hi dashiel sorry it took me so long to comment but now I have my thoughts straight. This I agree is a very beautiful dedication to who you are no matter what people say about you. I loved how you stay consistent through out the poem this time as well. I can tell here you went out of your confort zone and wrote strongly from inside your heart and I loved it. Obviously you take very much pride in your heritage. I think what you are saying through out is that you are very happy for your freedom. I also loved how you seemed to personalise this and it shows how much you care for this one person. You also seem to be speaking "one voice" for all of your country members which I thought added a very loving touch. I can tell here how nuch you again take pride in the love of your country. You make the character seem so real and I think you tried to make us see through your eyes and I believe you did a wonderful job. I read through this a few times and didn't see any errors :). Very beautiful write overall though. |
by Hellon
I was so absorbed in this poem...I have a few Filipino friends who I fondly call flips..they don't seem to mind, so I am familiar with some of the things you talk about here..the person (a hero) the final poem and the language (no..I don't speak it). Anyway...as I said ...totally absorbed until this... |