Comments : Misleading Masks (Line Message)

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This is also a great poem. In the first stanza it seems like you are saying that this person is hiding behind a mask and he lets his sword do "all the talking". I can see this person as a warrior fighting for honour for their country or a war. No words need to be spoken with this person because they are very sure of themselves. They are a strong fighting and believe they can win. No matter who is with them. Even if they are by themselves. I loved the ending here because it's kinda true in life. You do have to be strong to survive. But since I think this is a warrior: their courage is high and fear is nil. :). Very unique and well written!