Bouquet Garni

by Satish Verma   Dec 2, 2013


A golden fish in
blue waters, with many eggs,
collecting the sperms.

Haiku in sun-
light was the essence of
the daydreaming.

The lost road in
bamboos comes out
as solitary song.

Satish Verma

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  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    3 Haikus in one with different images for the reader to see..nice write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    The lost road in
    bamboos comes out
    as solitary song.

    -- I really like the image of this haiku as well as the thought one can gather from it. Actually, anyone can take a different view from this piece. I searched the title and I see it's a bouquet of herbs. So I thought that that's what each of those haiku were like... put together to give a greater picture. Thanks for sharing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice, I like it

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I liked how you did three different haikus here. I love how each one tells a different story. I believe the second one is the most powerful because it tells the story that there is so much you can say in such a small amount of writing. Very creative writing style you have.