by Maple Tree Dec 2, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Corridors of locked door knobs |
by Beautiful Soul
First- This is a very detailed poem and it took me a while to form my opinion. I believe what you are saying here is that you are in your room with a locked door and dreans are haunting your mind. You are crying because a person you love is no longer with you. Winter holds bad memories for you. I love the use of virgin. You make "snow" seem very beautiful and pure even though you write about something dark it seems. I also love the word spy used for dreams. I think you mean that your dreams become a reality for you. |