Congrats on the win, I like how you separated each part, it lets me focus on each individual part.

I love this poem and how I can relate to it as well. Deliciously written. :)

Congrats on the win too :)

The images from one verse to the other falls in place one by one vividly with emotions swelling behind each one. I really like the visuals, the way you have drawn in the climate as well as environment..well penned.

Congrats on the win.

Cool

Judges comment:

Narph has a way with describing things that make me feel like they're my own thoughts. This poem left me wanting more, as her poetry often does, but it leaves the reader to form their own opinion. It feels like a very rigid relationship, a forced one out of habit, because they have to. This was a really interesting poem to read!

Judging comment:

I liked this poem as it was such a unique find and being a sibling myself I can relate to it as there is nothing worse than non-existent relationships between siblings. I really enjoyed the way this progressed throughout and thought the second to last verse was very well done as it created a melancholic feeling ad to the poem and a sense of both loss and longing for something that was never there yet should be-a relationship. Lovely work here.