The only thing I don't love is the length of the poem. It seems you rambled on a bit too much to get your pointacross. Thats just what I think. The imagery you portray though is very lovely and you personalise it very well . The idea is great though. I love the idea of writing about a date as it shows a lot of emotion . Again the imagery is wonderful. And I love the story you tell as well. The lines start out with a beautiful set up getting ready so so speak and the the nervous feelings inside ypur tummy. I love the real feeling you give. It is very connectable. The hand holding is a great touch. Spending the time with your love is all that matters I agree. Again you seem to ramble on in this poem and talk to much. I would love to see it simplified to make it have personality and not "bore" the reader. This really is a lovely write though. Well done

Edit- I also think you can simplify the title I think that isalso a bit wordy for my taste. You could name it " first date" or something like that. To catch the readers eye. But that's just what I think :).