by Meena Krish Dec 4, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The tender hug |
Very Nicely Penned!!! |
I'm with Ms. Sylvia, too. The emotions are portrayed well... It's really sad when our wealth of love is gone... We feel homeless and empty... But memories are treasures that will be kept inside our hearts... Great write :)) 5/5 |
by Ray Blue
So much emptiness. Someday will be filled with joy..I got carried away upon reading. |
by Ray Blue
So much emptiness. Someday will be filled with joy..I got carried away upon reading. |
by Everlasting
I'm also with Sylvia, the tone in the poem is evident but I like that the poem is written with such calm that it takes the reader in without them feeling overwhelm. |