by Lofallenve Dec 4, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The pebbles lie, |
by Beautiful Soul
This is a great poem. The imagery is so vivid and clear. I loved how you you took on idea and stuck with it the whole time. That is very hard to do. I see here maybe you are on a road trip and you are trying to relax but you can't without the right music. I loved also how ypu think about something in the past and a song can do that for you. The story is lovely and the ending is great as well. You tell a real story here. Well done! |