Comments : Incomplete fate

  • 11 years ago

    by Skys Gal

    So beautiful, i love this poem, you obviously put your heart and entire soul into it and with that you blew me away while reading tihs, outstanding poem!!! 100/100 Bravo

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Sad but beautifully described..it realates to many of us... Thanks for sharing! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    ~Striking words! and feelings. One word to describe it: compelling.