This is a really cute poem. The only thing I suggest is shorten your poems because for me you tend to say alot of the same things and I feel like you can shorten the poem to make it feel intimate with the reader but that's just me. For the poem it self I love it because you tell a story of two real people in love and I can tell you put your heart and soul into it. I loved the wording as well because it is very simple but to me there is warmth in each line you write about. You make the characters come alive with each stanza. The characters are bubbling and it seems like they are living in their own world. I love that because it makes the character feel more in love with each other. To me this is overall a good poem because of the message it says. And as the reader I feel connected with them like I know them personally. Great poem.