This poem was very interesting to me.

I have not really read a poem like this one yet, so I had to read it twice. The texture isnt bad, and the flow seemed to be ok.

Nice write

Anything that starts never stop till you are done, for an incomplete sentence, poem or story is an incomplete life..just like life well that is how I feel.

Though the flow is undulated I think for this write it good. For it speaks the mind rather then making it all flowery and smooth..good job :)

Keep penning..take care.

I sort of get the message you are trying to have the reader understand but it is jumping all over the place and I sense that there might be more than one message in your words. I think I had said this before on one of your other writes, I think you could rewrite this, eliminate redundant thoughts and repeated words, shorten it up some, make it flow smoother.

This is a very interesting poem I agree. The beautiful message is there yes. Again you write about flowers and you want them to inspire you. I think here you want to write about the fragrance of that beauty. I agree the flow is great here and here you didn't flood the poem with overused wording which makes this in my opinion one of your best poems :). Well done