Loneliness swallows a person inside out and to get out of its grip is hard..I know and have been through it.

Loosing the only love, the hand that helped you through is like loosing one of your limbs. Behind each stanza there is not only pain but a touch of anger too. I can relate to this and pray that all will work out for you..take care.

This is nice. what u want to say in this I can feel.

Nice one.
Good Job.

Robert I understand the message and emotions you are feeling and putting forth with these words. It is lacking that punch to the gut that is hovering right beneath the surface of each word. With just a few changes, taking out some and's, I, this poem would grab the reader, shake them and they would have no doubt of how you feel, because they would feel that way to.

I like this poem because you hold the consistency of sadness. It sucks when you lose a loved one. It feels like your whole world crashes down. I like the way yoiu worded this too. Each line holds a hint of sadness growing more sad with the story. I can see this as a poem based on reality as well. Overall though I saw no flaws at all. You did a great job