It's been forever, that we have loved, looked at our memories of lasting love or a lost love. It might only be a few days but always seems like forever when in pain or hurting or remembering a lost love. New love or lasting love, the time seems to be short and we want it to last an eternity. I get both of the feelings and emotions from this write. A good love poem, makes we "wistful", remembering good times and bad times, good love and bad love. Good job.

To me this is full of memories that are from a time in the past. You charish the one you love and maybe miss them a lot. I like the use of looking into the skies because that tells me they are passed away now. But they will always live forever in your heart. Overall this is a very beautiful poem you have written. The imagery is very nice and the lines tell a great story. Well done

I enjoyed reading this poem, the rhymes did not sound force, plus I read it in this gentle tone but also in a reminiscing one that it just pulled me right into the poem. I also liked that the poem started with the same words it ended.

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I don't know how to say,
this is really beautiful and perfect in every way..
keep writing like this..

From start to end I can feel an ache, a longing for something that made you smile that is no more as you walk through its memories and the beauty it gave while it lasted.

I like the flow and uninterrupted smoothness of the rhyme..as always beautifully penned..take care.